My "kid" for this month is Chloe H. and she chose to write her blog on her favorite book "Flawless" by Sara Shepard. In Chloe's blog, she explained when the book was published and what the book was about without giving too many details to give away the whole story. She also states that this book is her favorite although it makes her mad at times and she gives the book five out of five stars! In my comment I told Chloe that I had never read the book and told her how well I thought she wrote her blog, because I saw almost no errors in her grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
My comment on Chloe's blog post:
"Hey Chloe!
I have not read the book Flawless, but from your description I can understand what goes on in the book. I like that you did not give too many details without giving away the whole book! Your grammar and spelling was really good! Keep up the good work!
Megan"
The second post by my "kid" is on the book Perfect, which is the third book of the Pretty Little Liars series. In her summary I found that it was a straight and to the point description of the main events of the book. In my comment I mentioned how I have watched the PLL series before, but have not read the books. I also mentioned that it was great to see people reading and enjoying the series.
My comment:
"Hey Chloe!
I loved her blog on Perfect the third book in PLL. Your summary of the book leaves a lot of open spaces which is a smart idea when wanting other people to read the book. I started watching PLL with my friends when I lived in the dorms and really enjoyed it. Its great to see other people also enjoying the series as well as reading.
Megan"
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